jmgoyder

wings and things

Love story 14

on May 3, 2012

The day after the moonflowers blooming,  I arrived on my bicycle as usual, with a feeling of trepidation and anticipation. I knew that something had passed from Husband’s hand to mine in that brief moment but I didn’t know what it was exactly.

I got Inna up and brought her favourite breakfast to her bedside. She sat up on the edge of her bed and took the bowl of Cornflakes, sliced banana, cream and sugar, gave me a smile and called me ‘Darling’ for the first time. By this time I had been working for her for around two months and I had determined myself to love her no matter what because, you see, she was very impatient with my ineptitude and often rather gruff so I think I saw our relationship as a sort of challenge. It wasn’t a very difficult challenge because I adored her and she fascinated me. So, when she called me ‘Darling’ I was elated and grinned my way back to the kitchen to prepare breakfast for Husband and the men.

It was wonderful to finally feel accepted by Inna, and, bright with confidence, I put the frypan onto the Aga, filled it with water and began the egg poaching. Then I put the toast into the automatic toaster, turning it up a little so it would toast faster. I wanted to have breakfast ready before Husband came in from milking; I wanted to have it all beautiful and perfect.

When Inna called me to get her up and dressed, I ran in to help her, forgetting about the toast, so, by the time Husband and the men entered the kitchen, there was quite a lot of smoke around the unpredictable toaster and the burning smell filled the small house quickly. But I didn’t smell it because I was so busy with Inna.

So, when I heard Husband’s voice, booming “Jules!” I left Inna partially dressed and raced back into the kitchen, thinking maybe, just maybe, Husband had picked me one of the moonflowers.

Instead, he picked up the burnt toast and said, nastily, “You are bloody hopeless!”


50 responses to “Love story 14

  1. Lee says:

    Always a pleasure to read your interesting blog. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

  2. bulldogsturf says:

    I still continue to love this story.

  3. Ah, yes. True love.

  4. Greisy says:

    I really enjoy your side story of how your love and relationship with Inna developed.

  5. dcwisdom says:

    Men! I burned our Sunday duck. He asked if I wanted a divorce. ~ Men!

  6. pixilated2 says:

    Oh dear…
    ~ Lynda

  7. Robyn Lee says:

    LOL! Can see this scene in the movie as well. You need to consider which actress gets to play Jules (and husband and Ina of course)…. Adore your story!

  8. Sue says:

    This is great stuff. Someday you have to turn this into a book!

  9. Randy Roberts says:

    This is why writers write, so that someday they can look back on what they wrote and rediscover the emotions and words of a time of triumph or tribulation. Good job, Julie.

  10. janechese says:

    ouch! just can’t please all the people all the time. loving the story.

  11. janechese says:

    oh good idea from Robyn!

  12. Fergiemoto says:

    Oh no! Those are difficult words to hear.

  13. terry1954 says:

    sorry about the burnt toast, but this blog was rather funny. i could picture it all

  14. Delicious read!

    If it wouldn’t have been the toast it would have been something else. As you had been reveling in the wonder of that brief hand holding, he had been having second thoughts.

  15. cuhome says:

    Guess this is one of those times when you just have to full-heartedly embrace the old saying, “You can’t win ’em all”!!! ♥

  16. Jo Bryant says:

    I agree that this would make a great book

  17. Definitely a book and a movie …well done ewe………

  18. Judith Post says:

    Sounds like your husband was a challenge too, just like his mother.

  19. niasunset says:

    I did too 🙂 in my earlier years… Made me smile once again. Inna was so nice, Thank you dear Julie, how nice to read your stories… You should make them a book… These are so precious. Love, nia

  20. victoriaaphotography says:

    Hmmmmm.

    Well, I suppose if he HAD kissed you next to the moonflower the night before, you would have been more stary-eyed and the frypan would have been burnt as black as the toast, so perhaps it was just as well he didn’t.

    In fact, perhaps it was just as well he didn’t kiss you for a long time. I think ‘years’ of burnt toast would not have endeared you to Husband at all.

    They say the way to a Man’s heart is through his Stomach – expecially Farmer’s Hearts.

  21. Ingrid Rickersey says:

    That’s so funny … love it!

  22. I agree that this would make a wonderful movie!

  23. Gruff mom, gruff son! I can’t wait to read what made your husband see the light and fall in love with you. It seems like a miracle happened, or you just bonked him on the head really hard with a frying pan.

  24. camsgranny says:

    Love it Jules, you have a way of writing that puts me right there, you really should consider putting it into a novel or something….I kinda know how the story ends, but sure like getting there….So did you konk him with burnt toast? can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!

  25. bluebee says:

    Your writing is so entertaining, Julie – I am so enjoying your story

  26. bluebee says:

    On this theme, here’s a poem by another talented blogger that you might enjoy

    #154

  27. dou dou says:

    Ha! I thing he was mad because he liked you 🙂

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