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Love story 16

on May 7, 2012

That first overnight I stayed at the farm was the only time I ever slept on the floor beside Inna’s bed. I didn’t know why she was so frightened that night except that she thought Husband-to-be had gone out and left her alone. He had never gone out and left her alone before, but they must have discussed it before asking me to stay.

Her bed was positioned in the centre of the room, surrounded by a pale pink carpet, so I simply fetched a pillow from the spare room where I was supposed to sleep, and cuddled down very comfortably. A couple of times, during the night, Inna reached her arm down to squeeze my hand and I squeezed back.

Eventually, Husband-to-be’s veranda party ended and I heard him go to bed in the adjacent bedroom. It was only then that Inna and I went to sleep, our fingers still loosely entwined.


37 responses to “Love story 16

  1. You and Inna remind me of Ruth and Naomi!

  2. bulldogsturf says:

    I love this story, hope you are ultimately going to turn it into an eBook.

  3. niasunset says:

    Lovely story again dear Julie… You are very talent to write them… And you have a wonderful touches into the words with your experiences, memories, observations… This is so important and makes them so precious… You should really make a book… And named as you did “Love Story (or stories)…. Thank you, it is so nice to read you dear Julie… with my love, nia

  4. I’m with the others this lovely love story should be turned into a book!

  5. I’m so glad it wasn’t a case of making you her slave and the palette by the bed was a permanent fixture. Whew!

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  7. cuhome says:

    Oh, I could feel the foreignness of sleeping on the floor, and your tentative, gradual bond forming with Inna. This is good!

  8. terry1954 says:

    this is so beautiful………..

  9. dcwisdom says:

    You were the daughter she never had. She loved you. Sweet story.

  10. Robyn Lee says:

    I love that you and Inna fell asleep with fingers entwined! So incredibly sweet ~ this is a double love story for sure 🙂

    Better day here 🙂 I’m giving you credit!

  11. bluebee says:

    How lovely – she quite obviously came to adore you, Julie

  12. Fergiemoto says:

    That’s sooooo sweet!

  13. I’m not sure who fell in love with who first. Love the hands being entertwined. What lucky women you both were.~

  14. How beautiful watching the trust between you two unfold. I am quite behind Jules so maybe you have shared more. I simply love your falling in love with Inna at the same time of your love for husband was growing ever so quietly. Do you think she knew at this point? That she could sense it?

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