jmgoyder

wings and things

Haikuishness

on August 12, 2012

Son haiku

You’re a total brat,

but you have your angel side.

I love you too much.

Unreliability haiku

I didn’t turn up.

“And why am I not surprised?”

my friend says to me.

Hearty haiku

Edges of my heart

are broken, frayed and scabby

I don’t pick the scabs.

Joyful haiku

I watch all the birds,

and the rain blurs my vision,

but they fly freely.

Flower haiku

The roses suffer.

The camellias grow huge.

I want sunflowers.

Friendship haiku

I am a good friend

to those who forgive me all.

Those people have wings.

Blogging haiku

The blog world is weird

and magically scented.

Unexpected bliss.

Husband haiku

You were once my world

and now this world has collapsed.

Parkinson’s disease.


37 responses to “Haikuishness

  1. Robyn Lee says:

    You are a genius Julie …. loved so many — cried from so many… laughed from so many —
    xxoo Hugs Hugs Hugs to you with Love

  2. meg lane says:

    Seventy times seven
    You’re supposed to forgive me.
    I want to have wings. M.L.

  3. Stunning handsome photo of Anthony Jules. I love that it shows the playfull side of him. I think this photo of him is so charming. It’s plain to see why you fell in love with him.

    Be good to you today~ BB

  4. bluebee says:

    Clever, funny, sad

  5. vivinfrance says:

    A beautiful set, despite the sadness of that last one.

  6. Rhonda says:

    unruly sister
    twins from another mother
    uncorrigible

    xo

  7. bulldogsturf says:

    Brilliant words with a deep meaning, love the photo of Ant.. so joyful and happy… Hugs girl, hugs…

  8. What talents you have, Julie. You’re amazing.

  9. Great haikus, and I love that picture of Anthony!

  10. loved each and every one and your personality came through so beautifully and honestly — it is like a little script of your life

  11. viveka says:

    Didn’t have a clue what Haiku was – never heard about it … could guess it was something from Japan – thanks god for google. What a cheeky photo – really like.

  12. terry1954 says:

    I loved this julie!!!!!!

  13. cuhome says:

    This is absolutely wonderful!!

  14. Great words from a great woman……………

  15. sbcallahan says:

    we could all learn something for Haiku, it takes few words to express so much! you are a genius and best of all a warm and kind spirit. thank you for sharing your ………. with us. i take your hand, my hand on your shoulder, pull you gently for warm hug. take care my friend.

  16. eof737 says:

    You are on a Haiku roll… I love them too… Quick and to the point… Need to work on more for my blog as I’m doing some other stuff offline that keeps me away from the blog lately… Great post! 🙂

  17. artsifrtsy says:

    I sometime forget just how bright and clear Haiku is. These were wonderful.

  18. ltpen315 says:

    Love them so
    You are so clever
    I wish I could do
    As well as you.

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